Luke Shumaker

Luke S.

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Biltmore Pilot: Joey's Race

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Following the daily life of garage owner Joey Biltmore and his friends and family in 1950s New York City.
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Kyle the Crab and the Big Blue Shell
Hide and Seek
Following
Wolf of Penumbra S1 Ep2
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Luke Shumaker 1 week ago

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Kyle the Crab and the Big Blue Shell short
Genre: Comedy,Animation,Family
When a small crab named Kyle loses his shell, he sets out on a whimsical and treacherous journey across the ocean floor to find the perfect replacement—only to discover that outsmarting greedy octopuses and ungrateful sharks is the price of claiming a home of his own.
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Luke Shumaker 1 year ago

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Hide and Seek short
Genre: Drama,Family,Comedy
Rating: 47%
I would have liked to get to know Kary's personal life a little more, maybe have an encounter with her druggie friends while Barny is over at her house. I think that would be a great moment for Kary and her character development. In which she would have to choose to do drugs with her friends, or to protect Barny and keep her promise. Also, when Kary first sees Darrin and Bary at her door, she doesn't seem surprised enough. She later says this is the first time she has seen her son since he was born, should she be more surprised that he is on her doorstep? I liked the part where she lures him out with the chocolate. The only problem was it was obvious that he was going to eat it and get sick. You should always try and avoid letting the audience get ahead of you. I think you have a very good start to a short film here. Keep writing, revising, and brainstorming new ideas.
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Luke Shumaker 1 year ago

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Hide and Seek short
Genre: Drama,Family,Comedy
A mother is granted visitation with her estranged son and she has hopes to reconnect with him.
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Luke Shumaker 1 year ago

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Revenge Of The Peanuts short
Genre: Drama
Evan just wants his pizza.
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Luke Shumaker 1 year ago

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Biltmore Pilot: Joey's Race television
Genre: Comedy,Family,History
Following the daily life of garage owner Joey Biltmore and his friends and family in 1950s New York City.
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Luke Shumaker 1 year ago

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Biltmore Pilot: Joey's Race television
Genre: Comedy,Family,History
Following the daily life of garage owner Joey Biltmore and his friends and family in 1950s New York City.
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Luke Shumaker 2 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

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Tooth short
Genre: Animation,Family,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
A false tooth thinks he’s a real tooth. What can go wrong? ps. It’s not a short but i don’t know how to change it.
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Luke Shumaker 2 years ago

just joined ScriptMother!