You did an overall job with the structure, character, dialogue, and concept. It came together and made sense and left me as reader wanting more. Your logline drew me in. A simple idea could be written so many different ways and I wanted to see how you were going to pull the story off. I also liked the picture of the stuffed animal for your story. There were some minor problems with the structure but nothing I couldn't overlook. The character was very relatable and the dialogue made me feel the angst of being a teen and liking someone.
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