The ending saved this short script. It really brought the point home. I was pleasantly surprised at the end and really liked your concept. Overall good job
When a mild-mannered Irish servant kills her brutal attacker, a British Lord, she flees for her life, hunted by his sadistic son-in-law who’s implacable as he is cruel and determined to “make the Irish slattern pay!”
Ben comes to the Fast Lane bowling alley everyday after school, partly because he idolizes amateur bowler, Jenny "The Comet" Cornell, and partly to escape some dark past.
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