I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
A Brother travels to a small coastal town in Maine, to search for his missing Brother. Retracing his brother's steps, he encounters unknown forces, as he uncovers the town's deadly secrets.
When James receives an unexpected letter from his lost wife, he sets off to find her in "their special place," a trip that quickly turns into a waking nightmare of twisted monsters.
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