I really enjoyed this story and the writing style was fantastic. Before I knew it I was on page 40, just going with the flow.
If this were my story, I would try to shave off a few more pages, but all in all there is not much fat to trim. Perhaps the scene in the bathroom could be shortened a little.
In conclusion, I would recommend this script to anyone. It is a great example of storytelling done right.
Sam, a directionless teenager on the fringes of Galway’s music and party scene, watches the world around her corrode — friendships, bodies, and belief systems melting into one blurred noise.
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