4th Wall short

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#Comedy #Romance

Morgan often breaks their own 4th wall because that's how they process things, but when Morgan dates this man (Damon) that really likes Morgan. As he becomes closer the connection that Morgan has with the 4th wall becomes complicated.

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Winner Draft #1

Summary

2 Reviews | 15 pages | 2 years ago | Draft 1

#comedy #romance #Rom com ##shortfilm ##short #Comedic Moments

A cute rom-com about opening up and patience

Industry Reviews

Interesting concept, but the pacing needs work

Overall, a very interesting concept. I would correct a lot of the grammar to make things read more smoothly.

Script Mother

Peer Reviews

Fairly quirky with a lot of potential for something bigger

I personally think that there is s lot of potential for this to go further as a full feature, if so chosen to. There is room for comical twists and turns that can be taken advantage of. I hope that you chose to carry this further more. If so, good luck with your script in the future.

Michael Kibler

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THIS IS A SKIT WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST UNDER A STRICT 1 MINUTE RUNTIME. PLEASE DO NOT INCLUDE FEEDBACK ABOUT LENGTH IN YOUR REVIEW, AND KEEP THE MEDIUM IN MIND. A husband's final request to his wife.

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4th Wall short

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#Comedy #Romance

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Industry Reviews

Overall, a very interesting concept. I would correct a lot of the grammar to make things read more smoothly.

Script Mother

Peer Reviews

I personally think that there is s lot of potential for this to go further as a full feature, if so chosen to. There is room for comical twists and turns that can be taken advantage of. I hope that you chose to carry this further more. If so, good luck with your script in the future.

Michael Kibler

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Final Release

THIS IS A SKIT WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST UNDER A STRICT 1 MINUTE RUNTIME. PLEASE DO NOT INCLUDE FEEDBACK ABOUT LENGTH IN YOUR REVIEW, AND KEEP THE MEDIUM IN MIND. A husband's final request to his wife.

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4th Wall short

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#Comedy #Romance

Awards

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Winner Draft #1

Summary

Industry Reviews

Overall, a very interesting concept. I would correct a lot of the grammar to make things read more smoothly.

Script Mother

Peer Reviews

I personally think that there is s lot of potential for this to go further as a full feature, if so chosen to. There is room for comical twists and turns that can be taken advantage of. I hope that you chose to carry this further more. If so, good luck with your script in the future.

Michael Kibler

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After accidentally causing their friend's death during a game of hide and seek, a group of friends struggle to decide what to do with the body.

A Merry Jewish Christmas

A man's attempt to be charitable on Christmas Eve is met with hostility by the recipients of his endeavors.

Final Release

**THIS IS A SKIT WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST UNDER A STRICT 1 MINUTE RUNTIME. PLEASE DO NOT INCLUDE FEEDBACK ABOUT LENGTH IN YOUR REVIEW, AND KEEP THE MEDIUM IN MIND.** A husband's final request to his wife.

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THIS IS A SKIT WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST UNDER A STRICT 1 MINUTE RUNTIME. PLEASE DO NOT INCLUDE FEEDBACK ABOUT LENGTH IN YOUR REVIEW, AND KEEP THE MEDIUM IN MIND. A husband's final request to his wife.

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