4th Wall short

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#Comedy #Romance

Morgan often breaks their own 4th wall because that's how they process things, but when Morgan dates this man (Damon) that really likes Morgan. As he becomes closer the connection that Morgan has with the 4th wall becomes complicated.

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Winner Draft #1

Summary

2 Reviews | 15 pages | 3 years ago | Draft 1

#comedy #romance #Rom com ##shortfilm ##short #Comedic Moments

A cute rom-com about opening up and patience

Industry Reviews

Interesting concept, but the pacing needs work

Overall, a very interesting concept. I would correct a lot of the grammar to make things read more smoothly.

Script Mother

Peer Reviews

Fairly quirky with a lot of potential for something bigger

I personally think that there is s lot of potential for this to go further as a full feature, if so chosen to. There is room for comical twists and turns that can be taken advantage of. I hope that you chose to carry this further more. If so, good luck with your script in the future.

Michael Kibler

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4th Wall short

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#Comedy #Romance

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Winner Draft #1

Summary

Industry Reviews

Overall, a very interesting concept. I would correct a lot of the grammar to make things read more smoothly.

Script Mother

Peer Reviews

I personally think that there is s lot of potential for this to go further as a full feature, if so chosen to. There is room for comical twists and turns that can be taken advantage of. I hope that you chose to carry this further more. If so, good luck with your script in the future.

Michael Kibler

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4th Wall short

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#Comedy #Romance

Awards

Approved

Winner Draft #1

Summary

Industry Reviews

Overall, a very interesting concept. I would correct a lot of the grammar to make things read more smoothly.

Script Mother

Peer Reviews

I personally think that there is s lot of potential for this to go further as a full feature, if so chosen to. There is room for comical twists and turns that can be taken advantage of. I hope that you chose to carry this further more. If so, good luck with your script in the future.

Michael Kibler

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Shake, Fry, Meatwad, and Carl travel, find themselves with some difficulties, and then restore good times. . . there is some conflict in baseball that gets resolved.

Kyle the Crab and the Big Blue Shell

When a small crab named Kyle loses his shell, he sets out on a whimsical and treacherous journey across the ocean floor to find the perfect replacement—only to discover that outsmarting greedy octopuses and ungrateful sharks is the price of claiming a home of his own.

Cheese Toddler

A young man struggles to make a positive impact when tragedy befalls his family during a time that would otherwise be joyous.

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