4th Wall short

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#Comedy #Romance

Morgan often breaks their own 4th wall because that's how they process things, but when Morgan dates this man (Damon) that really likes Morgan. As he becomes closer the connection that Morgan has with the 4th wall becomes complicated.

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Winner Draft #1

Summary

2 Reviews | 15 pages | 3 years ago | Draft 1

#comedy #romance #Rom com ##shortfilm ##short #Comedic Moments

A cute rom-com about opening up and patience

Industry Reviews

Interesting concept, but the pacing needs work

Overall, a very interesting concept. I would correct a lot of the grammar to make things read more smoothly.

Script Mother

Peer Reviews

Fairly quirky with a lot of potential for something bigger

I personally think that there is s lot of potential for this to go further as a full feature, if so chosen to. There is room for comical twists and turns that can be taken advantage of. I hope that you chose to carry this further more. If so, good luck with your script in the future.

Michael Kibler

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THIS IS A SKIT WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST UNDER A STRICT 1 MINUTE RUNTIME. PLEASE DO NOT INCLUDE FEEDBACK ABOUT LENGTH IN YOUR REVIEW, AND KEEP THE MEDIUM IN MIND. A husband's final request to his wife.

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4th Wall short

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#Comedy #Romance

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Winner Draft #1

Summary

Industry Reviews

Overall, a very interesting concept. I would correct a lot of the grammar to make things read more smoothly.

Script Mother

Peer Reviews

I personally think that there is s lot of potential for this to go further as a full feature, if so chosen to. There is room for comical twists and turns that can be taken advantage of. I hope that you chose to carry this further more. If so, good luck with your script in the future.

Michael Kibler

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A pair of nearly identical neighbors, one a.struggling actor, another a Russian gangster, must confront the accident of their appearance, their differing life philosophies, and one committed contract killer in this comedy of errors.

The Process

A high school kid, interested in film, aspires to create a great short film for a project. He later discovers the harsh reality of what lies ahead.

Final Release

THIS IS A SKIT WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST UNDER A STRICT 1 MINUTE RUNTIME. PLEASE DO NOT INCLUDE FEEDBACK ABOUT LENGTH IN YOUR REVIEW, AND KEEP THE MEDIUM IN MIND. A husband's final request to his wife.

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4th Wall short

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#Comedy #Romance

Awards

Approved

Winner Draft #1

Summary

Industry Reviews

Overall, a very interesting concept. I would correct a lot of the grammar to make things read more smoothly.

Script Mother

Peer Reviews

I personally think that there is s lot of potential for this to go further as a full feature, if so chosen to. There is room for comical twists and turns that can be taken advantage of. I hope that you chose to carry this further more. If so, good luck with your script in the future.

Michael Kibler

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Dopplegangster

A pair of nearly identical neighbors, one a.struggling actor, another a Russian gangster, must confront the accident of their appearance, their differing life philosophies, and one committed contract killer in this comedy of errors.

The Process

A high school kid, interested in film, aspires to create a great short film for a project. He later discovers the harsh reality of what lies ahead.

Final Release

**THIS IS A SKIT WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST UNDER A STRICT 1 MINUTE RUNTIME. PLEASE DO NOT INCLUDE FEEDBACK ABOUT LENGTH IN YOUR REVIEW, AND KEEP THE MEDIUM IN MIND.** A husband's final request to his wife.

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THIS IS A SKIT WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST UNDER A STRICT 1 MINUTE RUNTIME. PLEASE DO NOT INCLUDE FEEDBACK ABOUT LENGTH IN YOUR REVIEW, AND KEEP THE MEDIUM IN MIND. A husband's final request to his wife.

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