Grey Hounds (Pilot Episode) v1 television

Overall this is a solid start to the story, but I wished more happened with this first episode between the characters, and it felt like this could fit into a 10-minute short. Work on the dialogue along with some parts of the story and try to spice it up with things that happen with characters and how it will affect what is yet to come. So far, this is solid but needs some work in specific areas like dialogue and story. Concept and Characters deve...