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When a revolutionary neural interface designed to enhance lives and provide unparalleled convenience is hijacked for sinister purposes, a determined programmer must confront the system’s flaws—and her own grief over a tragic loss—to stop it from enslaving humanity.
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26 pages |
1 year ago
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In a society consumed by technological convenience, Riley Quinn, a brilliant software developer, creates a revolutionary app that seamlessly integrates users’ lives into their phones. But when she sells her invention to a corporate giant, it’s twisted into a tool for mind control and murder, forcing her to take responsibility for the unintended consequences of her creation.
In a society consumed by technological convenience, Riley Quinn, a brilliant software developer, creates a revolutionary app that seamlessly integrates users’ lives into their phones. But when she sells her invention to a corporate giant, it’s twisted into a tool for mind control and murder, forcing her to take responsibility for the unintended consequences of her creation.
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I like the story idea, but I would like to see a resolution at the end.
Also, maybe provide more explanation of how the app works, its business model, and how they discuss their own revenue metrics vs. whether to accept the offer.
I didn't understand how she was discouraged that Dad couldn't make progress the 2nd time, but then suddenly he's walking the 3rd time.
The first time the script mentions vitallink, it wasn't clear that was a company...
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