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Men Without Women by Marlon Schwiersch

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The writer understands the story world. The dialogue is clever. But I couldn't find a goal for the protagonist or an arc.

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scott zimmerman 6 days ago

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Men Without Women short

Genre: Drama

Rating: 40%

I think there's a story inside the writer's mind, but it hasn't come out with clarity yet. This script doesn't put a challenge in front of the protagonist that requires her to develop and solve. The events in her life would frustrate anyone, but she didn't reacting to the events until she commits a murder with no apparent planning. What's the resolution after the murder?

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Men Without Women short

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A look into the day-to-day life of a Berlin stripper, as she deals with weird customers, rising rent, and an ever-growing bloodlust...

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Men Without Women short

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