Stranger short
#Thriller #Mystery/Suspense #Sci-Fi/Fantasy
By
Ric
Max
How can we save others when we cannot save ourselves?
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23 pages |
5 years ago
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Draft 1
A young girl suffers a trauma after a chance encounter with a strange man who appears to have kidnapped her. Trapped and without any means of escape she uses her wits to negotiate with her kidnapper. However her kidnapper has bigger secrets to reveal.
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Reading this script turned out to be a real pain. I kind of liked the story and the gradual revealing
of what the heck was going on, but it was a real fight to get through it all.
The imagination this author has is comprehensible, I can clearly see what is meant to be seen.
But it is written in an overload of information, plus all the camera stuff is just a pain.
What I don't like - what NOBODY likes - when reviewing a script is being told...
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