The ending saved this short script. It really brought the point home. I was pleasantly surprised at the end and really liked your concept. Overall good job
When 2 strangers get stuck on an elevator together, secrets stir an exploration into the moral conflict of seeking justice and revenge, in this thriller drama.
Following the death of his mother, a playwright loses his purpose. He goes out into the middle of the ocean for inspiration and gets stuck there. In his last moments alive, he begins to tell his life in the form of a standup routine told to an imaginary audience.
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