The ending saved this short script. It really brought the point home. I was pleasantly surprised at the end and really liked your concept. Overall good job
Ben comes to the Fast Lane bowling alley everyday after school, partly because he idolizes amateur bowler, Jenny "The Comet" Cornell, and partly to escape some dark past.
a young book lover, visits their favorite library and unknowingly gives a quarter to the ferryman. The library's books soon reveal Francis's deepest fears, trapping them in a sinister labyrinth, a nightmarish maze.
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