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Fall of Jessop

Fall of Jessop by Aaron Sullivan

#Drama #Thriller

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A promising idea that needs foundational work in formatting and character.

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Genre: Drama,Thriller

Rating: 40%

The script is built on a concept that has commercial viability. In order to reach that commercial viability, future drafts will have to focus on improving its structure, story, and character development. A few questions to answer are: What thematic question are you looking to answer? Who is the protagonist of this story? What flaw do they need to overcome? What stands in the way of this? Implementing the answers to these questions will raise the quality of the work.

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Genre: Drama,Thriller

Hidden agendas, black robes, who can make it out alive?

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