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FoodVentures by Priya Narayanan

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Genre: Mystery/Suspense,Drama,Sci-Fi/Fantasy

Rating: 7%

I really could not understand what happened, Amrita falls into a fantasy or a dream? I could not point why it went so quickly from the restaurant to the street, maybe there is a strong concept that is lost in the writing, but after she fell I was struggling to keep up as if the plot was forcing a twist that had nothing to do with the begining of the story. Honestly, I was bored and did not really felt like reading. It felt as if the character was just going on a random set of events that were not connected and the descriptions were so cold and unimaginative that i did not really cared to read it, it felt pushed and perhaps too raw, as if it was only written out of the mind without any previous thinking.

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