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Spiritual Awakening by James Odulaja

#Drama #Thriller #Romance

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Fair Concept which can be improved by reworking the structure, character and dialogue

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Kjan Kwaran 4 weeks ago

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Spiritual Awakening feature

Genre: Drama,Thriller,Romance

Rating: 13%

Overall, once the characters are reworked to fit the core theme of the story and the structure is reworked to disable the crosscutting to flashbacks improve the pacing with dialogue that fits how the character would naturally talk in that scenario based on their uniqueness while not being forced to artificially blurt out lines of dialogue for the audience's benefit.

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Spiritual Awakening feature

Genre: Drama,Thriller,Romance

Through the trials and tribulations of being a teenage drug-dealer in the South-side of Chicago, Edris Johnson repents and gives his life to Christ.

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