Marcelino Lopez

Marcelino L.

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City of Grit

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disheveled Chicago cop tries to put a stop to new drug being dispersed around the city while also trying to fix his personal life
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We’re No Saints
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Marcelino Lopez 3 weeks ago

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Genre: Crime,Drama
Rating: 67%
Overall the script seems to be a good world builder for the lives of Dom and Paulie. Not only does this story join in realm with other stories we have seen before, but it also gives extra details in between. Details that feel realistic. There is also a building anxiety given how the main character Dom keeps getting reminded about a big liability in his life...... Paulie. The script does a great job of of placing an individual in a world of uncertainty and stress due to loyalty of family. In addition, the script provides a realistic approach to those living in the world that do not feel a shred of responsibility. That lack of responsibility could lead to life changing circumstances for the worse. I feel that this story has great potential to be seen on the big screen. There is a small issue with pacing that I feel can be adjusted and tweaked. Once that is done, the sky is the limit. The script reads like a real life book of the streets.
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Marcelino Lopez 3 weeks ago

just claimed a review for a script.

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Genre: Crime,Drama
In Chicago’s Little Italy, Dom focuses on starting a fresh life. But, when a bookie looking to collect on his cousin’s debt gets violent, Dom must choose between salvation or sin.
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Marcelino Lopez 11 months ago

uploaded a script.

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Genre: Crime,Drama,Thriller
disheveled Chicago cop tries to put a stop to new drug being dispersed around the city while also trying to fix his personal life
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Marcelino Lopez 11 months ago

just joined ScriptMother!