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#Drama #Thriller

By Aaron Sullivan

Hidden agendas, black robes, who can make it out alive?

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1 Reviews | 28 pages | 5 months ago | Draft 1
#drama #thriller #murder #Cult #Conspiracy thriller
When a small county is invaded by unknown figures in black robes, the lives of the county will be changed forever.

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Overall, I really liked this. I cared about the characters and I'm very intrigued by what's really going on. I feel that the opening scene could go on for just a little bit longer just so you get us to really care about the characters and maybe include that flashback earlier so it's more devastating when David and Oliver are lost later. That's really the main feedback I have because I thought everything else was superb and great for a tv pilot so...
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