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3 pages |
5 years ago
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Draft 1
Mary doesn't have the best self-esteem in the world so getting ready for a date isn't the easiest task in the world.
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Instead of giving my traditional feedback on these shorts saying it should be longer, I'll pass on that. You do have a decent concept here with the girl who I'm going to assume is a teenager (It's never stated how old she is) relearning herself that the true beauty will come from the inside. and that in turn works well for a short skit. One thing I will say though is in the beginning when we first are introduced to Mary, our protagonist here, des...
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