I ran out of time to do a full read of the script. Try adding more time for reviews.
1) You dialog is unrealistic. I do not read scripts, I put them in a text to speech program and listen to the script. You need to do the same. Close you eyes and hear the voices. Do they sound different? Is everyone using the same words? Are you putting in exposition instead of dialog?
2) You have people going into someone back yard and trying to start a r...
In the aftermath of a bombing in East Jerusalem and the looming shadow of a major war, Uri, the Mossad commander, unites with Ahlem, the Hezbollah commander, to combat ISIS terrorism.
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