Dale Morgan

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I'm a unique mature scribe who has countless exploits trekking the USA. My ability to write is phenomenal... OK. Enough of the BS. I couldn't write my way out of a paper bag. So why read my script? It is different. Dale

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10
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Flyer feature
Genre: Animation
Logline: After being thrust into the strict Air Guild community, a timid girl must adapt and learn quickly to earn her Flyer status. ( Reviewers, be nitpicky. I want the best script, my feeling be dammed.)
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3 months ago
The Very Thought of You feature
Genre: Drama,Crime
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I have seen a variant of this story in some crime T.V. drama. Slow until the action starts with the robberies. The end is very predictable. I have notes in the script notes feature. Page 4 Mutable sentences that should be just one: "Heath takes a mug out of the cupboard. He sets it on the pantry. He takes out a filter and places it in the mug..." "He takes out a can of coffee powder. He puts two spoonfuls into the filter. He takes a burning kettle and pours water into the mug..." Heath takes a mug out of the cupboard, putting it on the pantry counter, placing a filter in it. Putting two spoonful's of coffee in the cup, then filling it with water from a hot kettle. - Boring! Heath take a deep breath as he reaches for one of two mugs in the cabinet. Placing a small filter in the cup. One hand shakes as he tries to put two spoonful of coffee in the cup. A tear roils down his face as he pours hot water from a nearby kettle. Page 6 Too long. "The funeral director holds out a clipboard with a document attached. He hands Heath a pen. Heath signs the document. He hands the pen back." The funeral director holds out a clipboard with a document. Heath signs it. Near the end of the script you have HEATH escape from a jail. Guards only have keys to get into the hallway of the cells. They can open the cells but someone else has to unlock the hallway door. Evidence rooms have safes, One person, high up in command has the combat ion to open it. Not the person who works there.

Dale Morgan just claimed a review for a script.
3 months ago
The Very Thought of You feature
Genre: Drama,Crime
Logline: An old man goes to the ends of the earth to fulfil a promise to his dead wife...
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Flyer feature
Genre: Animation
Logline: After being thrust into the strict Air Guild community, a timid girl must adapt and learn quickly to earn her Flyer status. ( Reviewers, be nitpicky. I want the best script, my feeling be dammed.)
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3 months ago
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3 months ago
An Accidental Courtesy feature
Genre: Drama
Logline: When the eight-year-old son of a white supremacist befriends and African American, he must struggle to keep his family and friend from finding out the truth of each other...
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3 months ago
Flyer feature
Genre: Animation
Logline: After being thrust into the strict Air Guild community, a timid girl must adapt and learn quickly to earn her Flyer status. ( Reviewers, be nitpicky. I want the best script, my feeling be dammed.)
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3 months ago
Flyer feature
Genre: Animation
Logline: After being thrust into the strict Air Guild community, a timid girl must adapt and learn quickly to earn her Flyer status. ( Reviewers, be nitpicky. I want the best script, my feeling be dammed.)
Dale Morgan just claimed a review for a script.
3 months ago
007: Origins: part one: Based on the story and characters of Ian Fleming short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
Logline: When Bond is just a teen, he does not expect his life to change.

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Flyer
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Genre: Animation
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After being thrust into the strict Air Guild community, a timid girl must adapt and learn quickly to earn her Flyer status. ( Reviewers, be nitpicky. I want the best script, my feeling be dammed.)

Along Came a Grandma
Draft #1
Genre: Animation
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Don't trust Grandma.

Star Track: Deep Space Ten
Draft #1
Genre: Animation
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Who need nine when there is a TEN

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