Concept is not good. Plot is good. The characters are real. The dialogue is a thumbs up. The action seems real enough but would have been better if there is conflict.
Climax is good.
Following the death of his mother, a playwright loses his purpose. He goes out into the middle of the ocean for inspiration and gets stuck there. In his last moments alive, he begins to tell his life in the form of a standup routine told to an imaginary audience.
**THIS WAS WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST UNDER A STRICT 2-PAGE REQUIREMENT, PLEASE DO NOT PROVIDE FEEDBACK REGARDING LENGTH** A woman comes to terms with her old flame's bride-to-be at his wedding.
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