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Apart - An Experimental Short by Marlon Schwiersch

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Good story that has great action and imagery throughout the script. I also liked the way you showed the text messages in a part of your script.

The couple Ep 3: Church by i n

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Great short that leaves you wondering what the outcome of the events that took place in the end.

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A helping Hand feature

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A man offers to help a younger woman. As time passes she helps him more.

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Finding television

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A man begins to have visions when a old friend of his dies.

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Apart - An Experimental Short short

Genre: Drama

Rating: 53%

Overall, this was a good short that had a good main character, very good action that describes the scene extremely well. The dialogue was good as well at the times that there was. I also liked how you used different things like adding notes and how you used the text messages as well. In conclusion I really enjoyed this story and everything you did with it, everything from the structure to the characters, and the dialogue were extremely good.

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Apart - An Experimental Short short

Genre: Drama
When the Protagonist's girlfriend breaks up with him, he deals with it by powering through five intense stages of grief...

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Finding television

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A man begins to have visions when a old friend of his dies.

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The couple Ep 3: Church short

Genre: Drama

Rating: 87%

Very good script, I enjoyed the dialogue in the scene where Ally and Keli were talking about how Alley shouldn't go back to her boyfriend after he cheated on her. The ending was great as her hurt and anger led her to do what she did, and it ends on a cliffhanger making you wonder what happens next. The story was really well done and written that provides a really good concept especially with involving the church and how serious they follow and respect their religion.

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The couple Ep 3: Church short

Genre: Drama
Going to church will save a girl's soul but not her relationship with her boyfriend.

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Christian Hobdy 1 year ago

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Finding television

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A man begins to have visions when a old friend of his dies.

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Christian Hobdy 1 year ago

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Christian Hobdy 7 months ago

A helping Hand feature

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Finding television

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Apart - An Experimental Short short

Christian Hobdy 1 year ago

Apart - An Experimental Short short

Christian Hobdy 1 year ago

Finding television

Christian Hobdy 1 year ago

The couple Ep 3: Church short

Christian Hobdy 1 year ago

The couple Ep 3: Church short

Christian Hobdy 1 year ago

Finding television

Christian Hobdy 1 year ago