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Title: Mimi & Vitus – “Adventures Beyond the Wall” - How It All Began -

Title: Mimi & Vitus – “Adventures Beyond the Wall” - How It All Began - by Ela Ilham v. Schöning

#Family #Animation #Action/Adventure

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A gentle and imaginative beginning with strong visual charm — now it just needs a little more spark to truly hook its audience.

Beware the Lions

Beware the Lions by Kelly Grendle

#Thriller #Action/Adventure #Comedy

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Strong premise and characters, but in need of structural tightening and refinement

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Title: Mimi & Vitus – “Adventures Beyond the Wall” - How It All Began - cover image

Title: Mimi & Vitus – “Adventures Beyond the Wall” - How It All Began - television

Genre: Family,Animation,Action/Adventure

Rating: 33%

Mimi & Vitus – How It All Began is a lovely start with a big heart. It’s beautifully suited for animation or storybook-style storytelling. The imagery is charming, the tone is comforting, and the message of family and connection is strong. To make this even stronger: Add a light mystery or unresolved thread at the end. Sharpen Mimi and Vitus’s individual personalities. Give the magical world a little more wonder or risk — something to make us curious to come back. This is a charming foundation — and with a few thoughtful tweaks, it could grow into something truly special and long-lasting for kids and families.

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Genre: Thriller,Action/Adventure,Comedy

Rating: 53%

Beware the Lions is a script with potential, it has commercial bones and some sharp character work. But as it stands, it's overwritten, overlong, and in need of editing. The tone wavers between spy thriller, buddy comedy, and tragic character study, but the script doesn’t commit fully to any of them. The emotional moments don’t land as hard as they could because the tonal inconsistency undercuts their gravity. What it needs: - A leaner, more focused first act. - Clearer genre direction: is this satirical, emotional, serious espionage, or comic heist? - Trimming dialogue and side scenes that don’t drive the story forward. - Simplifying the plot. The bones are there. The heart is there. But it needs discipline to become a better script.

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Title: Mimi & Vitus – “Adventures Beyond the Wall” - How It All Began - cover image

Title: Mimi & Vitus – “Adventures Beyond the Wall” - How It All Began - television

Genre: Family,Animation,Action/Adventure

When twin siblings discover a magical wall in their new home, they're pulled into a hidden world where emotions take shape and every adventure helps them face real-life childhood challenges.

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Genre: Thriller,Action/Adventure,Comedy

Wishing he were retired, a melancholic government agent is forced to partner with a snarky teenage safe cracker on his final mission. Conspiracy, espionage, and that annoying brat just won't shut up.

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